Tuesday, April 19, 2011

Sun Play Here and There

April sun in Indiana is thin
and plays hide and seek with flat gray skies,
but mostly chooses hide.

April sun in South Carolina is loud
and calls for you to come play in warm breezes,
but also sits in calm corners.
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6 comments:

  1. Linda BApril 19, 2011 at 10:01 PM

    Nice way to play with weather & geography. It is that mercurial springtime. I like the 'plays hide and seek'.

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  2. Amanda VillagómezApril 19, 2011 at 11:30 PM

    I loved seeing the contrasts as well as your word choice!

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  3. elsieApril 20, 2011 at 8:49 AM

    I like your word choice too.

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  4. TamApril 20, 2011 at 12:25 PM

    Good way to describe the sun--very thin and loud!! Thanks for warming me up a bit.

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  5. Christy Rush-LevineApril 20, 2011 at 9:21 PM

    I love the parallel stanzas. These are very haiku-like (maybe they are intentionally haikus, but they definitely send the haiku-vibe) and rich with imagery. Lovely personification.

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  6. esssMay 20, 2011 at 3:56 AM

    Excellent piece of writing...
    Customized Essay

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