Nice way to play with weather & geography. It is that mercurial springtime. I like the 'plays hide and seek'.
I loved seeing the contrasts as well as your word choice!
I like your word choice too.
Good way to describe the sun--very thin and loud!! Thanks for warming me up a bit.
I love the parallel stanzas. These are very haiku-like (maybe they are intentionally haikus, but they definitely send the haiku-vibe) and rich with imagery. Lovely personification.
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