Starting
waking, stretching, yawning, washing,
dressing, eating, brushing, cleaning,
rousing, changing, feeding, singing,
driving, walking, opening, planning,
prepping, waiting, smiling, greeting,
Starting
I though, if I can think about mornings with verbs, why not nouns? Are they different for weekends and workdays?
Morning Morning
Pillows and blankets Pillows and blankets
Alarm and light Slippers and robe
shower and brush Whispers and lamp
clothes and shoes Coffee and cookies
coffee and toast Sofa and book
Morning Morning
Hmm...maybe morning is a person....with a split personality?
Morning calls softly on voices of birds,
its coffee-scented breeze pulling you to your feet.
It breathes deeply as the first rays of sun
touch your face, welcoming you to
a new day.
OR
Morning screams suddenly with a shrill voice,
vaulting you abruptly from dreams to reality and bed to floor.
It pours glaring lights into unready eyes
and laughs at weak protests over
a new day.
Maybe I should try irony--after all, I'm composing poems about morning as the sun sets through the windows by the sofa.
AH Morning my favorite time of day. I love the morning of nouns, and the last poem sounds just like my daughter in the mornings when she was a little girl...ok who am I kidding it sounds like her now at age 17! :)
ReplyDeleteLove the idea of taking a word and creating the poems out of nouns or verbs. I prefer the morning that calls softly, that's the pleasure of semi-retirement.
ReplyDeleteI am not a poetry person but I love these. They speak perfectly to my life. I love the mix of verb only and noun only descriptions. I may borrow this as a lesson...thank you!
ReplyDeleteAll great ideas, but those final morning ones - split personality - are terrific. We all have mixes of those, don't we? I love the 'screams' 'vaulting', and 'glaring'-so truthful!
ReplyDeleteI love all the variations. Unfortunately, for me, morning vaults me into the glare of reality. You have such a gift with words.
ReplyDeleteI'm jealous! Wonderful poems. Mine would have to be early afternoon. I'm not a happy person in the morning. :)
ReplyDeleteAmazing creativity..
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